Mandy, you have so much potential. Your graphic sensibility is their at the surface and all it will take is a continued effort through roughs and discussions. The images just fall short, the hand is in the same position and this could have been varied. Your colors could have been light and playful which would have been very ironic depending on your slogan. Advertising 2: The fruit on a stick is a better graphic than the ones you presented. I think you really need to work on your slogans so they are ironically playful. The idea of the “ic” ending is great but as we discussed in class what you presented was only the tip of the iceberg, your text typeface did not work in respect to the concept of contemporary Mexican. Advertising 3 the text does not work with the images lets get this fixed Presentation: Not good, they need to be cleaner and presented with care, the right size. I really would like to work with you and get the images p to a great standard. packaging: Just starting to work. You need to work on getting the graphic symbolically rough roughs and more roughs. You are starting to get the idea with the cut out in the packaging!It is just the layout and shape clarification.
Mandy, you have so much potential. Your graphic sensibility is their at the surface and all it will take is a continued effort through roughs and discussions. The images just fall short, the hand is in the same position and this could have been varied. Your colors could have been light and playful which would have been very ironic depending on your slogan.
ReplyDeleteAdvertising 2: The fruit on a stick is a better graphic than the ones you presented. I think you really need to work on your slogans so they are ironically playful. The idea of the “ic” ending is great but as we discussed in class what you presented was only the tip of the iceberg, your text typeface did not work in respect to the concept of contemporary Mexican.
Advertising 3 the text does not work with the images lets get this fixed
Presentation: Not good, they need to be cleaner and presented with care, the right size. I really would like to work with you and get the images p to a great standard.
packaging: Just starting to work. You need to work on getting the graphic symbolically rough roughs and more roughs. You are starting to get the idea with the cut out in the packaging!It is just the layout and shape clarification.